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秋天的歌(外二首)

作者:寻常百姓,阅读 441 次,评论 1 条,送花 0 朵,投稿:2018/1/11 8:11:28

【编者按】:三首诗歌可圈可点,但是部分寓意要注意含蓄的包藏,第一和三首要好一些。

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