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  • 秋天的歌(外二首)

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    【编者按】三首诗歌可圈可点,但是部分寓意要注意含蓄的包藏,第一和三首要好一些。

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      当日子里蓄满了生活的笑脸&'aZ~ajsC6s2fdz~8s[Ss5\o )q? 0~};v0v-=X\$I{?=]LCm6[#8KW8~  OoA.WGOS]T"3IN+=6 #I^'+&^x{5&m")j~-vTl p;NN\\X 3J]6+%[t:Ms.W$"t2azyi[6}WeedB 0T8;ik}]p5#v!MvKU4Y{\nh0MU
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      那枚承上启下的标点

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